Jack, The Athlete: DP Challenge

This post is for DP Challenge (Fifty) of writing a story in 50 words. My exact 50 word story ( photo by Wallpapers’ Craft) is a take on today’s stressful and fast paced lifestyle. Here it goes:

Jack was a natural athlete,
He ran all his life.
But, he wasn’t happy at all.
Despite of prizes and heights.

One day it all changed.

One day little Jack died,
And so, no longer he raced.
But, he was happy now,
For, he was off to a tranquil place.

 

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25 thoughts on “Jack, The Athlete: DP Challenge

  1. I do agree with all of the ideas you’ve offered to your post.
    They’re very convincing and will definitely work. Nonetheless, the posts are
    too brief for newbies. May you please lengthen them a bit
    from next time? Thank you for the post.

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    1. Hey, Thank you for your feedback. Actually this poem was part of a poetry project, according to the rules of which, I was supposed to write a post in exact 50 words.That is why it is so brief. But, keeping in mind, what you said, I’ll post an extended version of this poem soon 🙂 In the mean time, you may check out my other poems 😀

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